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| author | Jonas Smedegaard <dr@jones.dk> | 2012-10-01 13:53:06 +0200 |
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| committer | Jonas Smedegaard <dr@jones.dk> | 2012-10-01 13:53:06 +0200 |
| commit | 8030df27b54fa3cce162ef765afc7bc10f1c81fa (patch) | |
| tree | ec21d46cd72c0b41f0f6fae2e9147a49a5a6bd0f /msg | |
| parent | 56ae1a1c19d817f16e886d7cef9ba3b6eb90a88b (diff) | |
Improve phrasing of analogy.
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| -rw-r--r-- | msg/facebook.mdwn | 11 |
1 files changed, 5 insertions, 6 deletions
diff --git a/msg/facebook.mdwn b/msg/facebook.mdwn index d5153db..fbd72f7 100644 --- a/msg/facebook.mdwn +++ b/msg/facebook.mdwn @@ -42,13 +42,12 @@ Facebook is one closed system: all activities happen on one central place. Jabber is an open chat protocol, to chat across many systems. -> Imagine you have an overprotecting mother, who allow you only to hang -> out with your friends at one certain spot in town - where she can see -> all that you do. +> Imagine having an overprotecting mother, who allow you only to meet +> your friends at one spot in town - where she can look after you. > -> You maybe have no secrets from your mom, but still appreciate the -> *ability* to be alone - to have some privacy. +> You maybe have no secrets from your mom, but probably still appreciate +> the *option* of being alone - to have some privacy. -Facebook is that one spot in town. Jabber is "let's go out somewhere". +Facebook is that one spot in town. Jabber is "let's go meet somewhere". Regards, Jonas |