From 8030df27b54fa3cce162ef765afc7bc10f1c81fa Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonas Smedegaard Date: Mon, 1 Oct 2012 13:53:06 +0200 Subject: Improve phrasing of analogy. --- msg/facebook.mdwn | 11 +++++------ 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 6 deletions(-) (limited to 'msg') diff --git a/msg/facebook.mdwn b/msg/facebook.mdwn index d5153db..fbd72f7 100644 --- a/msg/facebook.mdwn +++ b/msg/facebook.mdwn @@ -42,13 +42,12 @@ Facebook is one closed system: all activities happen on one central place. Jabber is an open chat protocol, to chat across many systems. -> Imagine you have an overprotecting mother, who allow you only to hang -> out with your friends at one certain spot in town - where she can see -> all that you do. +> Imagine having an overprotecting mother, who allow you only to meet +> your friends at one spot in town - where she can look after you. > -> You maybe have no secrets from your mom, but still appreciate the -> *ability* to be alone - to have some privacy. +> You maybe have no secrets from your mom, but probably still appreciate +> the *option* of being alone - to have some privacy. -Facebook is that one spot in town. Jabber is "let's go out somewhere". +Facebook is that one spot in town. Jabber is "let's go meet somewhere". Regards, Jonas -- cgit v1.2.3