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@@ -42,13 +42,12 @@ Facebook is one closed system: all activities happen on one central place.
Jabber is an open chat protocol, to chat across many systems.
-> Imagine you have an overprotecting mother, who allow you only to hang
-> out with your friends at one certain spot in town - where she can see
-> all that you do.
+> Imagine having an overprotecting mother, who allow you only to meet
+> your friends at one spot in town - where she can look after you.
>
-> You maybe have no secrets from your mom, but still appreciate the
-> *ability* to be alone - to have some privacy.
+> You maybe have no secrets from your mom, but probably still appreciate
+> the *option* of being alone - to have some privacy.
-Facebook is that one spot in town. Jabber is "let's go out somewhere".
+Facebook is that one spot in town. Jabber is "let's go meet somewhere".
Regards, Jonas