small improvements to intro and headers

1 files changed, 11 insertions, 5 deletions

diff --git a/_intro.qmd b/_intro.qmd
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--- a/_intro.qmd
+++ b/_intro.qmd
@@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ You can add authors, supervisors and publication date
 as a YAML structure at the top of the text.
 And you can produce a web page or a PDF document from your text,
 sensibly styled and laid out according to academic conventions.
-You cannot, however, annotate a string according to content domain.
+You cannot, however, annotate a string
+contextually related an arbitrary content domain
+(only navigationally for hypertext and quotationally for citations).
 
-Quarto supports hypertext and citation annotations,
-but not arbitrary domain-specific annotations.
 You can spell out in prose
 that one set of numbers is in meter and another in nautical miles,
 or that one citation is supportive and another a rebuttal,
@@ -33,8 +33,14 @@ and as intuitive and unobtrusive writing aid.
 
 ## Problem formulation
 
-The aim of this project is to extend Pandoc and Quarto
-to support domain-specific annotations.
+Quarto supports hypertext and citation annotations,
+and document-wide metadata.
+The aim of this project is to extend
+Pandoc processing and Quarto authoring workflow
+to support writing arbitrary domain-specific annotations
+which are converted to metadata,
+if possible preserving reference to location of the string.
+
 This aim has been framed with the following problem statement:
 
 **How can Pandoc