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 % Debian Pure Blends
 % Jonas Smedegaard
-% Khammam, October 20th, 2011
+% Sarada, Khammam, October 20th, 2011
 
 # Overview
 
-  * Debian is generic - Blends are specific
-  * Purity: all is Debian
-  * Why bother?
-  * Technical details
-  * Team, community, users
-  * Future
+  * Internet
+  * Home
+  * Passion
+  * Trust
+  * Debian
+  * Debian Pure Blends
+
+# Internet
+
+Internet is our digital parallel World...
+
+# Home
+
+  * Where you are *safe*
+  * Where you can *store* goods
+  * Where you can *fumble* and experiment
+
+# Passion
+
+  >* Purpose
+  * Astronaut?
+  * Nuclear Scientist?
+
+# Passion
+
+  * ~~Purpose~~
+  * Passion!
+
+# Passion
+
+  * ~~Purpose~~
+  * Passions!
+
+# Trust
+
+  >* trust: feeling comfortable as guest in another home
+  * proper trust == mutual trust
+
+# Healthy environment
+
+  * everyone has a **home**
+  * everyone is driven by **passions**
+  * everyone finds mutual **trust** in some others
 
 # Debian - the universal Operating System
 
+  * Free Software
   * Stable
   * Flexible
+  * very very big
 
-Debian is the universal Operating System.
+Debian is "the universal Operating System"
 
-Goal
-  : Usable everywhere
+Goal: Usable everywhere
 
 # Debian - very flexible...
 
@@ -32,28 +70,28 @@ Goal
   * ~~Very flexible: very good~~
   * Very flexible: very confusing!
 
-Debian is too flexible: confusing and to some even scary!
+Debian is maybe too flexible: confusing or even scary...
 
 # Debian - ways to simplify
 
-  1. Keep things as-is - educate users instead
-  1. Remove choice
-  1. Provide multiple defaults
+  1. Tolerate it: Use it as-is
+  1. Remove choice: Use e.g. Ubuntu
+  1. Use a Debian Pure Blend
 
 # Debian - simple if generic defaults are ok
 
   * Mainstream (but not too new) hardware
   * GNOME desktop
-  * Iceweasel web browser
+  * Iceweasel web browser (= Firefox)
   * Exim MTA
   * Apache web server
   * MySQL database server
 
-Debian *is* simple - if you happen to like its defaults.
+Debian *is* simple - if you like the defaults.
 
 # Debian Pure Blend - Debian for a specific purpose
 
-Debian Pure Blend (in short DDD): a subset of Debian configured to
+a subset of Debian configured to
 support a particular target group out-of-the-box.
 
 Goal 1
@@ -62,23 +100,6 @@ Goal 1
 Goal 2
   : Advertise this fact to the world to attract users and developers
 
-# Debian Pure Blend - technical parts
-
-  * package selection(s)
-  * customizations
-
-The concrete work to include as packages with official Debian.
-
-# Debian Pure Blend - reality parts
-
-  * goals & noise about progress
-  * package health + encourage additional software packaging
-  * passion & patience
-  * good relations with Debian package maintainers, competitors, and upstream authors
-  * good relations with users
-
-Surrounding work making a Blend relevant.
-
 # Debian Pure Blend - current blending projects
 
   * Debian Jr
@@ -93,7 +114,10 @@ Surrounding work making a Blend relevant.
   * Debian GIS
   * Debian Multimedia
 
-Projects working on Blends - some pure, some not (yet)...
+# Deebian Pure Blends - future blends
+
+  * FreedomBox
+  * Debian LAN
 
 # Debian Pure Blends - all Debian
 
@@ -106,7 +130,7 @@ DDD
 
 # Debian Pure Blends - why bother?
 
-Nice on paper with ideals and priciples, but...
+Nice ideals and principles in theory, but...
 
 What's in it for me?!?
 
@@ -123,24 +147,6 @@ What's in it for me?!?
   * teamwork - others might help you refine and maintain your setups
   * common structures - others might take over if you loose interest
 
-# Tech - Debian support overloading choices
-
-  * Debian installer
-  * tasksel
-  * debconf
-  * aptitude
-
-# Tech - examples of non-pure blending
-
-  * include non-Debian packages or non-packaged stuff
-  * include Debian packages from different Debian suite
-  * configure system other than via Debian package installation
-  * install using non-Debian media
-
-You don't own your system - you provide one for others to own.
-
-So don't refine it like a (sloppy) user: Handle it like a Debian developer!
-
 # Tech - Debian, generic setup
 
   * select package profile(s)
@@ -270,3 +276,17 @@ When all is in Debian, with no dirty tricks:
  * APT explicit choice of alternate dependency/recommendation
  * APT dontcare vs. explicit choice of default dependency/recommendation
  * Config::Model - semantic configfile handling
+
+# Final words...
+
+Be **passionate**!
+
+**Share** your passion!
+
+# Final words...
+
+Be **passionate**!
+
+**Share** your passion!
+
+This talk: <http://dr.jones.dk/blends/talk/khammam/>