From b898197326ba8f94dfedafd440e2dd4c8a7105b9 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Jonas Date: Thu, 21 Mar 2013 13:11:07 +0100 Subject: Fix typos and rephrase some details slightly. --- fb/epfsug2.mdwn | 18 ++++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 10 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) (limited to 'fb/epfsug2.mdwn') diff --git a/fb/epfsug2.mdwn b/fb/epfsug2.mdwn index 87ab5c1..f642977 100644 --- a/fb/epfsug2.mdwn +++ b/fb/epfsug2.mdwn @@ -6,16 +6,16 @@ On wednesday 7. of November I gave talk at EPFSUG in Brussels about FreedomBox. -EPFSUG is an interest group Free Software users working inside the +EPFSUG is an interest group of Free Software users working inside the European Parliament. -The FreedomBox is a project to that helps non-geeks care about their +The FreedomBox is a project to help non-geeks care about their personal privacy when online, same ways as geeks have practiced for a decade or more. -The goal is a small, cheap hardware box looking like and operating like +The goal is a small, cheap physical box looking like and operating like an internet gateway or wifi router many are accustomed to nowadays - but -with two additions: +with three additions: * Easy and intuitive to setup and personalize for non-geeks * Offers routines to help you protect your privacy @@ -25,10 +25,12 @@ with two additions: control of your information - you can then use that control to keep secrets from others or to share with others as you like. -Talking about personal privacy at the European Parliament was a bit of a -twist, because that place is not a home but a (huge) office space, where -it is arguably less obvious that you should treat information as -personal, or that you are even allowed to do so. +Talking about personal privacy in the European Parliament +can seem a bit of a stretch. +It is not a home but a (huge) office space, +where it is perhaps less obvious +that you should treat some information as personal, +or that you are even allowed to do so. Try watch the [videos][], and if you have questions then please don't hesitate to get in touch with me about them. -- cgit v1.2.3